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Saturday, 24 August 2013
Wrong Comma Use? Weak Sentence?
Wrong Comma Use? Weak Sentence?
Could someone tell me what's wrong with this sentence?
She also goes on dates with herself, and she ends these nights with bubble
baths.
Is the comma here wrong? Any other issues? How would you write it?
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